What Am I Working On?

What Am I Working On?

I will update this page every few weeks so you will know what I am working on currently. More »

Publications

Publications

Here you will find a list of all books, short stories, and more that I have published. More »

 

The Daily Prompt: June 19, 2018

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The Daily Prompt: June 18, 2018

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The Daily Prompt: June 17, 2018

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The Daily Prompt: June 16, 2018

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Book Review: The Girl

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The Girl 
Lola St.Vil

My rating: 3 of 5 stars

Oh my goodness! This book had so much potential and it just..flopped. I believe that if the author had spent more time developing the characters, found a better way to include all the Angelic history than to just hand it over to us in massive paragraphs of information, and cut out about 75% of the immaturity of the characters, the book would have been so much better.

The parts where the action occurred kept me reading, but other than that, about 80% of this book should have been on the “Edit Floor” and heading for the trash pile. And where the book ended, no, that should not have happened that way at all. I was so angry when I turned the page in a big forthcoming action scene, and bam, “The End.” If it had been a physical copy of the book, I probably would have thrown it, but as it was my Kindle, I refrained. No book should ever end with more action coming but never arriving.

I gave this three because the story was there, but you have to really work hard to find it under all the background information that was thrown at you in chunks. The actual “story” was only about fifty pages of the book.

 

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If you have written a book and would like to request a review, email me at cauthonj@outlook.com.  Please keep in mind that I receive many requests and though I am a fast reader, I do have to leave time for my writing and my family.  Please allow at least a month for me to read your book.  If I need more time, I will let you know.

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